The formatting is fine - but it looks like you took a lot of the text and just ported it from the old website to the new one. It's VERY wordy, I think you could re-think the content to make it a bit more effective.
For example, you have a page called pricing and payments. But on that site, all I can find are your Friday/Sunday rates, deposit, and uplighting prices. It's fine if you don't want to post your full pricing menu... but having a page called "Pricing and Payments" probably isn't the best. And then especially if you're going to list pricing like this on another piece of the site:
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You've talked about how effective your videos are on YouTube... but you have to look hard to find them on your site. If something is working for you, make it more prominent!
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If I were to reframe all of this... I'd think about the main things you want people to see about you. Like.. on a sales call, what are the first couple of things you mention... and then hit people in the face with that stuff. Make it so that I don't have to guess where your good content is, and that I can just sort of flow through the page easily and learn what you want me to learn.