got the nav bar working properly, and added a special....still a work in progress
http://www.sightsandsoundsdj.com
http://www.sightsandsoundsdj.com
Opinions are greatly appeciated
- Thread starter Patrick
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DJ PAUL
Director of Entertainment Fulfillment
Some of your paragraphs end with one word, a hard return and then another word underneath
like
this
instead of like this.
Don't know what software you are using, but you may want to play with that or use 1 font size smaller
like
this
instead of like this.
Don't know what software you are using, but you may want to play with that or use 1 font size smaller
Blacktie, I just went through the site and did not see any sentences that had a hard return on them, can you possibly let me know where you saw that?
I do like the planner idea to get email addresses... I may use that in a different way as I don't do many weddings.... I like that it is so simply done; it doesn't ask 10 questions that need to be answered.
A wedding DJ's biggest attribute and selling point, in my opinion, is their personality; of which I see none in your website. Add more 'you' to it, all I see now is a bunch of text. Just my 5 cents.
I see it under your "Why Us" page. It may also me my browser - I use Firefox.
just finished using all the advice here and from other places and have the final product now up....
http://www.sightsandsoundsdj.com
http://www.sightsandsoundsdj.com
Much better but... In your opening you wrote: With close to 20 years experience as a mobile entertainer, Sights and Sounds
provides a wide range of options for your next event. Although we specialize in
wedding, ...
Sight and Sounds is not a mobile entertainer. It should read: With close to 20 years experience as a mobile entertainer, Joe Blow, of 'Sights and Sounds' provides a wide range of options for your next event. Although we specialize in weddings, ...
provides a wide range of options for your next event. Although we specialize in
wedding, ...
Sight and Sounds is not a mobile entertainer. It should read: With close to 20 years experience as a mobile entertainer, Joe Blow, of 'Sights and Sounds' provides a wide range of options for your next event. Although we specialize in weddings, ...
Nicest version yet. Good job.
Your social icons all have image title of 'Photobucket'....
Your WP contains alot of the same information and is much better looking. Why not dive into creating a better WP site and pointing your domain name to it? You've already spent alot of hours with the Yahoo builder only to realize it's very limited in what it can offer you. Since you now have a decent yahoo site that will tide things over for awhile, invest some additional timing in learning the backend things of WP and I think you'll be alot happier with the results you'll get.
Your social icons all have image title of 'Photobucket'....
Your WP contains alot of the same information and is much better looking. Why not dive into creating a better WP site and pointing your domain name to it? You've already spent alot of hours with the Yahoo builder only to realize it's very limited in what it can offer you. Since you now have a decent yahoo site that will tide things over for awhile, invest some additional timing in learning the backend things of WP and I think you'll be alot happier with the results you'll get.
I might just do that Randy. December looks like it will be a slow month for us, so I might spend the extra time looking into WP.