My logo, opinions???

[Matthew]

that is a sample of it on a dark BG.

 

[eezee]

At First glance it reads " OUND RAYZ"

 

[Matthew]

heres an update, what ya think?

the logo im gunna keep the same

 

[Sounds To Go]

The "S" is decipherable on the black background - falls off into oblivion on the white - you would have to darken the "S" to use a lighter background so it draws up to the front.

Looks good!

 

[DjDennis]

when I see that update all I read is


Bound
rayz

the S in Sounds looks like a over sized B

 

[jtnichol]

Looks good to me. I can read it and understand what your business is about. Keep up the good work.

 

[Scotch]

Neat effect, but sometimes you have to keep it simple. In all honesty it took me a while to read what it said. How many potential clients will glance over it, think "pretty" and move on with your company name not firmly embedded in their head.

 

[Matthew]

I figure, when and if they get my buisness card it is from me handing it to them as I like to great and get a sence of my clients, thus i will say the name so they know who I am with. Also the website on the card has the S clear, so if they are intrested most likely they will look online, not that thats done yet either but I dont realy have much clientell yet as im finishing school still, so this is all a big work in progress

Thank you all for your replys and comments, realy helped me get the new card designed and exactly how i wanted it.

 

[Scotch]

The reson you see my logo in white is because i have it n my website which is mostly black, however the image is actually transparent so it looks VERY nice on black

Yet still as difficult to read, IMO.

 

[Kevin Kelly]

What's causing the problem is the cool blue ray line circling around the S...maybe have it go in a different direction? I can read everything else ok that the ray is next to....it's just the S that is causing problems. Try losing it all together and post that example....

Another idea...try making the "S" the same color as "ound Rayz" and I bet it would be more readable then....

 

[jokerswild]

Yet still as difficult to read, IMO.

Listen to Scotch he knows what he's talking about....


I agree that neon blue swoop thing you got going makes your logo very hard to read.

 

[DJ Wes]

I would get rid of the 'S' font all together. Let the blue ray itself form the letter 'S'.