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Mr. K

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We do not want you to hire us so that we can tell you what you SHOULD want; rather, we want you to hire us because we are able to provide what you REALLY want.
 
Otherwise It Will Just Get Flushed With The Pee Pee

ballphotodj said:
Same here....

I'm not sure about starting it with a negative statement...but that could just be me....

Still thinking....
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Gotcha. Okay.

Well, guys, if you think of something better, then let me know.

If it's not worth pursuing, then don't bother.

Thanks.
 
Refined Statement #1

The Vinyl Spinner said:
We do not want you to hire us so that we can tell you what you SHOULD want; rather, we want you to hire us because we are able to provide what you REALLY want.
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Maybe something along the lines of this?

Providing you with what you Really want, not telling you what you Should want.
 
The Vinyl Spinner said:
We do not want you to hire us so that we can tell you what you SHOULD want; rather, we want you to hire us because we are able to provide what you REALLY want.
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How about something a little more positive......

"We are Professional Disc Jockeys, here to fill your needs....... not ours"
 
Just off the top of my head ... how about these suggestions ...

1. "What you want; is what you should get!"

2. "If you have dreams of your party's needs; believe that we deliver your dreams!"

3. "Your party needs are our party goals!"

Maybe these humble suggestions will lead others to embellish my musings.

groovy guy
 
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