Critique my new site please.......

To many ads? Support ODJT and see no ads!
I would minimize the "LLC" in your logo. It doesn't have to be the same size as the business name, in fact, I don't believe you need it. If you are Dance All Night DJs LLC doing business as Dance All Night DJs, then that is all you need in your logo. However I believe you need to file an additional form to establish the DBA.

Also, update the Title in your html. Look at the top of your browser and the tab, it says "Home". That can say whatever you want it to say and it's a key for SEO.
 
Nice looking site, very professional. Except... Remove the Google ads. Do you want you clients booking you for hundreds, or your competitor while you get a few pennies.

Focus on marketing yourself and getting the big gigs (ie: any gig) rather than the pennies from AdSense. They are just a blackhole.
 
You specialize in weddings? really? i don't see any pictures of brides or a blurb about weddings or any info about anything. Although I do see a picture of a guy with headphones...where are the testimonials?
 
Drop the ad's. Minimize the top banner, it is taking up to much screen realestate and is not necessary to be so big.
Can you embed the contact form within a page from djintelligence? I hate how I lose the top navigation bar once I click on that page.
Also you don't have your phone number listed anywhere on your website, is that intentional?
 
mikemerlin said:
You specialize in weddings? really? i don't see any pictures of brides or a blurb about weddings or any info about anything. Although I do see a picture of a guy with headphones...where are the testimonials?
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Yes I did forget to add my testimonial page thanks for the reminder. Let me see what forms I have that I can add about my weddings.

mikemerlin said:
Forgot to put a smiley face at the end of my last post :) Just trying to be honestly constructive
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Thanks for your reply :triwink:

dobby10 said:
Drop the ad's. Minimize the top banner, it is taking up to much screen realestate and is not necessary to be so big.
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Will look into it and see if we can place it smaller.

dobby10 said:
Can you embed the contact form within a page from djintelligence? I hate how I lose the top navigation bar once I click on that page.
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Let me see if we can embed it.

I don't know why you guy's are not seeing my phone number? What browser are you guy's using? On FF & IE I see my number listed.

(event to your last detail from your special songs to all the bridal party names from anywhere in the world. We have packages to meet your budget. Call us today! 305.335.1985)

Thanks guy's I am stating all these changes that you would like me to edit.
 
Thanks guy's I will do some more changes because of all your feedback.

I agree my number is not that visible so I am going to place it in multiple pages.
I will add some more information about weddings and Quince which is what we specialize in. I will drop the google ads from the main page, my header will get renamed, I will try and shrink the size of the header and my testimonials page I forgot about so it will get added back in.

Thanks for all your help guy's.
 
I didn't even do a critique on the website, because I immediately noticed a HUGE problem with your site content. It appears that both of your websites are using the same content?! If so, you are creating "Duplicate Content" in the eyes of the Google gods. It is imperative that you get this corrected ASAP. You might get blacklisted or omitted from the search engine result pages. Competition in my area does this on a regular basis and I love it, because they easily become non-competition. Either change your domain pointers or redirect within your .htaccess file.

To give you an idea, I've listed a handful of websites that redirect to 1 website:
www.litemyevent.com
www.liteupmyevent.com
www.lightupmyevent.com
www.michiganeventlighting.com
www.enlightenmyevent.com
www.enlightenmywedding.com
www.enlightenmybigday.com
www.lightmyevent.com
www.lightmybigday.com
www.lightupmywedding.com
www.lightupmybigday.com
www.accentmyevent.com
www.accentmywedding.com
www.michiganweddinglighting.com
www.michiganpartylighting.com
www.michiganlightingdesign.com
www.mylightingdesign.com
www.myweddinglighting.com
www.myeventlighting.com
www.bigdaylighting.com
www.mybigdaylighting.com
www.accentmyparty.com
www.michiganlightingcompany.com
www.uplightmichigan.com
www.uplightinginmichigan.com
www.michiganuplights.com
www.michiganuplighting.com
 
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