I'll side with Jon on this one as well. Fantastic job, especially for a first attempt. Just wow. Now for the critiques, ditch the gobo shot, definitely. Your spacing and choice of coverage areas were perfect but one question. Did you have the fixtures right against the wall? I noticed the chair rails clipping your uplights. If space permits, I'll usually pull the fixtures away from the wall to get around the chair rail. The moving heads had me salivating. I especially loved how you did the slightly-moving white spotlights on the first dance. Any videographer would kill to get to shoot that event. It's promo-gold, I tell ya. Oh and great editing. Very nicely done on the production.
Thank you for sharing.
