redesign is done

[Guest]

Ok, I decided to not go with anyone and just do it myself. I could not get any outside programs to work (FrontPage or Expression), so I just ended up sticking with Sitebuilder, and started with a completely blank white page and went from there.

As always, critiques are welcome.

http://www.sightsandsoundsdj.com

 

[Steve LeBlanc]

The purple back ground is overbearing; try a lighter, more pastel back ground. Look at a lavender, rather than purple; makes the text difficult to read.

Testimonials mean nothing without a name, date, event location....that info at least lends to some credibility to them....

 

[drzinc]

The sign in section is slightly off on Opera ok in IE and Chrome also agree withe the purple is to well, purple.

 

[Randy A]

Patrick....this is killing me. After the holidays, I'll gladly help you get things worked out so that you can use the FP website you created, if you'd like the help.

 

[SemiRetired DJ]

My first reaction...

Sorry Pat, but that blue is awful. If you are going to go with a pure text sight, like mine, go with black and white and keep it simple.

 

[MKR160]

Pat. Not all that bad. I used EZDJ websites to do mine last week as I have no real knowledge of making a website. So far it looks pretty good and im happy with it so far. Just a thought.

 

[Steve LeBlanc]

Pat. Not all that bad. I used EZDJ websites to do mine last week as I have no real knowledge of making a website. So far it looks pretty good and im happy with it so far. Just a thought.

Michael - Your website is nice...

couple of observbations: 1) The font is to large requiring unnecessary scrolling 2) on you "about us page; while there's lots there (including a photo), at no point do you give your name..

 

[DJ Ronster]

On the pricing page....

If you are a non-profit organization with a fund raiser coming up, all the above can be yours for the low of $250!!

"price" missing after low and before of 250

 

[DjDennis]

Patrick, the yahoo sitebuilder ebook is still online if you want to use it for reference!

 

[cerebro]

The colors/layout threw me off, but besides that I will give you an extremely helpful tip... Get a content management system! Google will love you ; )


... also I just took a second look at your website and I see cities, but no states. What area do you serve? I have no idea where Hagtown is. Include this in your on-site optimization (title alt meta content yadda yadda). Hope that helps.