Possible new card design
- Thread starter djsarge
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I like it, Sarge.
If I were to change anything, it would be to reduce the size of your name and title info.
If I were to change anything, it would be to reduce the size of your name and title info.
I was thinking that too.... the way it looks now, "Special Occasions Entertainment" might be "what you do" rather than who you are!
Yes I am!!!:sqerr:I think you are fuc*ed in the head!The card is great. Looks elegant and high class to me.
Sarge,
First off I think your hand should be a little lower down her back. Also try the kiss from the left side so we can see a bit more of your face.
I'm with Chuck as it does look elegant. But think of this if you will. What do you want them to remember the most, the company name or your name? Having both so large is a bit confusing but not a big deal.
Doesn't convey "party", "fun" or "entertainment" to me, but if a couple kissing in the middle of a very large field makes you think of a fantastic dance party, then go with it.
Sometimes we work so hard to be elegant and classy that we forget that we're supposed to be fun.
Sometimes we work so hard to be elegant and classy that we forget that we're supposed to be fun.
that's true "B", but I think Bride or most of them, like that "classy" touch..... the back of his card he can use a "fun pic" use both sides!!!
I think the card is great... Your company name and Your name are similar sizes.. But other than that it shows your name Special Occasion ...
I especially like the idea of the two kissing without seeing their faces.
Nice work
I especially like the idea of the two kissing without seeing their faces.
Nice work
Ok, so I guess the consensus is for now, smaller font on the name and increase the font on the url?
Maybe for the back I can use that dancing pic of Kirby. lol
Maybe for the back I can use that dancing pic of Kirby. lol
Sarge,
I think what the lad means is at first glance the design doesn't say anything about you as a business in whole, what you really are or what you represent. A bride and groom kissing in a field says nothing about you as a dj/entertainment service. It's just a couple kissing in a field.
I like the design but I see it more as a photographers card than a DJ's card. I'm not one to talk since mine is a simple boring card. But, if you're going with either of these two I like the one on the right.
I think what the lad means is at first glance the design doesn't say anything about you as a business in whole, what you really are or what you represent. A bride and groom kissing in a field says nothing about you as a dj/entertainment service. It's just a couple kissing in a field.
I like the design but I see it more as a photographers card than a DJ's card. I'm not one to talk since mine is a simple boring card. But, if you're going with either of these two I like the one on the right.
Ron got my comment exactly right - save for the text, the card says nothing about you or your business. You could take the same text and lay it over a picture of dogs playing poker (or the Mona Lisa!) and get the exact same result. There's no personal connection to you or what you do, unless you provide a unique entertainment service for very small groups who like to stand in a thigh-high wheat field.
If that's the case, it's a FANTASTIC card. But how many couples call you with events taking place in thigh-high wheat fields?
Another question: Does that setting even exist anywhere in your area? Without going too deep in discussion here, let me just say that people can tell when something doesn't look right even before they realize it. If you've ever read even the first chapter of "Blink" by Malcolm Gladwell, you'll know what I'm talking about.
I realize that it's just a business card design, but it's also the first impression that many people will get of you and your company. It could be much better.
If that's the case, it's a FANTASTIC card. But how many couples call you with events taking place in thigh-high wheat fields?
Another question: Does that setting even exist anywhere in your area? Without going too deep in discussion here, let me just say that people can tell when something doesn't look right even before they realize it. If you've ever read even the first chapter of "Blink" by Malcolm Gladwell, you'll know what I'm talking about.
I realize that it's just a business card design, but it's also the first impression that many people will get of you and your company. It could be much better.
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There is a Bride and Groom. They are kissing so we assume they just got married. What do you do after you get married? Have a reception. The word entertainment is on the card. It says Disc Jockey on the card.
How hard is it to figure out that he is a DJ?
If you are a club DJ, you want lights and people dancing on the card. Wedding DJs should have class and elegance on their cards.
Oh, Love the one on the right of the two.
How hard is it to figure out that he is a DJ?
If you are a club DJ, you want lights and people dancing on the card. Wedding DJs should have class and elegance on their cards.
Oh, Love the one on the right of the two.