My New Holiday Parties Craigslist Ad

[sparkieg]

Just thought you folks might like to see what I just posted to Craigslist for holiday party bookings. I know it's a tad small, but I'm working to resize it.

Enjoy.

 

[Jeff Romard]

Nice Greg...Thats the kind of advertising that catches attention

 

[Mr. K]

Nice. But it's a tad small. You should work to resize it.

 

[sparkieg]

holiday party ad redux

This is the re-do of the original ad.

 

[1cdj]

what are you sayng my holiday parties suck jk

 

[Steve LeBlanc]

I don't think you need the apostrophe in pros...given the graphic...

At Your Holiday Party don't get STUCK with crappy music !

 

[Dave Miller]

What does that photo have to do with the message?

Sure it grabs the eye, but then what?

 

[MBM]

I think the Picture would go better with

"Don't get STUCK! with a bad DJ."

 

[Dave Winsor]

Howdy,

I second the "stuck" angle, it works better and removes the word "suck" in conjunction with the holiday aspect.

Dave

 

[ahoustondj]

I would have commented on Pole and suck in the ad but will refrain out of respect for the fine ladies who are also a part of this forum. I don't want to be tarred and feathered again. As you can see, the feathers came off but the tar stuck!

 

[MBM]

I grabbed the picture, wrote an ad using the Don't get stuck type ad along with it, posted it last night on craig's list, I have gotten two calls for corporate gigs from it today.

 

[ahoustondj]

I grabbed the picture, wrote an ad using the Don't get stuck type ad along with it, posted it last night on craig's list, I have gotten two calls for corporate gigs from it today.

See what you can learn from your fellow buddies here at ODJT! You ought to send the originator a virtual thank you card. It does not require postage you know.

 

[DJMC]

Enjoy CL while its still brand new in your area.

Just remember, in a few short years--- CL will become a running JOKE, a sort of cesspool of fraud operators, lowballers, and charlatans.

(As it has become in San Francisco, Los Angeles, and Sacramento)

 

[MBM]

Oh I've had the Scammers contact me as well, so far nothing booked, but a couple of thing sold.

 

[Mr. K]

Enjoy CL while its still brand new in your area.

Just remember, in a few short years--- CL will become a running JOKE, a sort of cesspool of fraud operators, lowballers, and charlatans.

(As it has become in San Francisco, Los Angeles, and Sacramento)

...just like those wedding DJ listings where the more money you pay the more recommended you are.

 

[Papa Deuce]

See what you can learn from your fellow buddies here at ODJT! You ought to send the originator a virtual thank you card. It does not require postage you know.

Or join Send Out Cards and send a real card!

 

[Mr. K]

Buy him a Pink Floyd record.

 

[sparkieg]

OK, after considering the responses here, I changed the ad again. Here is what I posted last night:

http://greensboro.craigslist.org/evs/819816813.html

Keep in mind that I do this for only one reason - to enhance and increase my Google page rank - if I receive calls for bookings from this ad, then so be it.

 

[Kirby Ball]

Makes much more sense now! Good job, Mr. Sparkie.

 

[Michigan DJ]

How does a craigslist ad increase your google rank?