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Greg I like it alot real classy and to the point. The only thing I would change is listing all the payment options under why choose us. I would make them all one point and add on other reasons to choose you to fill the space
 
Yea I agree about listing all the payment options...waste of space.

Why do you not give them the space to enter the year of their wedding on the contact form?

While I'm not saying you need some phenomenal logo, the use of Times New Roman in the company name on the top makes it a bit too easy to pass by. Maybe something a little more stylized.

Otherwise, very nice site, good colors, clean, easy on the eyes, informative, good use of pics.

This line..."The Kickit Productions Difference is Ultimate Customer Service"...something about the use of "ultimate" doesn't read right, but that's just me.

"A Sound Investment"...haha, that used to be my tag line with my old company name The Sound Reason (which was my dad's company name before he passed).
 
Looks nice. Clean, simple, and to the point!

Some ideas:

On the homepage, in the upper-left where your name is, I would make the name a slightly larger font-size, and "Mobile Entertainment" smaller.

I would also lower the size of "A Sound Investment," and maybe even put it in quotes and/or italics. Right now it fights for prominence with your actual company name, and at a quick glance, could be thought to be the company name. Like "Kickit Productions" is a parent company or something and "A Sound Investment" is the mobile dj division or offshoot. This confusion is driven up 3000-fold on the "DJ Services" page.

And I agree about listing out all of the payment options. If your cc processing is thorugh PayPal, just make a one-line item "All major credit cards accepted through PayPal."

I would make the phone number more prominent in your header, and maybe even consider losing the address... unless of course it is an actual store-front or whatnot.
 
why even mention paypal? It has had negative response from some customers. Merely show the symbols and add all major credit cards accepted.
 
I agree with what's been said. I like the layout, colors, etc...

Things to change after a quick look:

*You need a logo at the top in place of the plain text.
*Lose all the different payment options. They do not each need their own line.
*Lost the testimonials if you only have two to list.
*The upper photo section is too long, you have to scroll down too far to see any content. It might have a cool effect if it were about half the length.
*Does anyone care about that 'Weddingwire Rated' stuff?
*Phone number at top should be under the address and BIGGER.
*If your market is weddings, lose the typical 'Disco DJ' set-up photo on your 'DJ Services' page in favor of one with a more elegant appeal. Many brides hate disco balls and speaker stacks, etc... I would rather see a photo of you at your gear with a headphone cupped to your ear.

Gotta run!
 
maestro said:
I agree with what's been said. I like the layout, colors, etc...

Things to change after a quick look:

*You need a logo at the top in place of the plain text.
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Steve - I don't have a logo for my business. I've tried to have one designed several times, but no one was ever able to come up with something that I liked.

maestro said:
*Lose all the different payment options. They do not each need their own line.
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True - I think all it needs is what has been said by others, that I accept all major credit cards thru paypal.


maestro said:
*Lose the testimonials if you only have two to list.
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I can probably have the designer add more.

maestro said:
*The upper photo section is too long, you have to scroll down too far to see any content. It might have a cool effect if it were about half the length.
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Sorry, you lost me on this one. Can you elaborate more?

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*Does anyone care about that 'Weddingwire Rated' stuff?
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I do - and to be honest, it adds credibility in my opinion.

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*Phone number at top should be under the address and BIGGER.
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The phone number is what the designer company calls a CALL TO ACTION statement. I'll mention that to them though and see what they say.

maestro said:
*If your market is weddings, lose the typical 'Disco DJ' set-up photo on your 'DJ Services' page in favor of one with a more elegant appeal. Many brides hate disco balls and speaker stacks, etc... I would rather see a photo of you at your gear with a headphone cupped to your ear.

Gotta run!
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That photo is from their stock. I don't have any pics of me such as you describe. Besides, I don't do the typical headphone between the ear and shoulder thing.

Thanks folks.
 
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