Ron, I'm not nit picking - but a common item I am seeing is spelling and sentence composition errors. I haven't pinpointed them all, but listed some examples.
Example, you say The Ballad Of Curits Lowe .. instead of Curtis Lowe.
On your home page, on top of the pictures, it says 'Misc for Site'. Why?
Another example (from your site):
My name is Cedron S. Swain Sr., but I go by Ron. I am a Charleston, SC native. Born and bred down here in the beautiful lowcountry. (See more information about Charleston, SC under the links section of the website.) I attended Bishop England High School, in downtown Charleston and upon graduating I was accepted at Winthrop University in Rock Hill, SC. After graduating with a degree in Computer Information Systems, I returned to Charleston and work for a great local company in their Information Technology department. I am a member of Blessed Sacrament Catholic Church and am a very active member in the Knights of Columbus Council #12472.
In the 4th sentence, you say 'see more information about Charleston, SC under the links section of the website' but you link to all these other things - so why not link that too?
Example redone:
My name is Cedron S. Swain Sr., but I go by Ron. I am a Charleston, SC native - born and bred down here in the beautiful low country - see more information about Charleston, SC under the links section of the website. I attended
Bishop England High School, located in downtown Charleston, and upon graduating I was accepted at
Winthrop University in Rock Hill, SC. After graduating with a degree in Computer Information Systems, I returned to Charleston and I do work in the Information Technology (IT) department for a great local company. I am a member of the
Blessed Sacrament Catholic Church and am a very active member in the
Knights of Columbus Council #12472.
Another example (from your site):
Our Services
We specialize in providing musical entertainment for your event. Be it background music, music to dance to,
karaoke, or a mix of it all we will help to make you event the best it can be. To see information about me, the owner & DJ/KJ check out the
Biography page.
We have provided music for all sorts of private events and have donated our time and services to local organizations as well, such as
Camp Good Times (
see testimonial here), MUSC's Safety Fair.
Music
Our music library is very extensive and updated regularly. Everything thing from older country and big band band classics to the latest in pop, rock & dance. We also have a very large collection of beach and shag favorites, we are on the coast of the Carolina's after all, where the dance was born. We have very anything and everything needed to get people up out their seats and shuffling their shoes on the dance floor. In most places, we can download instantly most any music requested from our subscription service providers that is not in our already extensive libraries.
IMO, it should read something like this / Example redone:
Our Services
We specialize in providing musical entertainment for all types of events. Be it background music, dance music,
karaoke or a mix of it all; we will help to make your event the best that it can be. Please check out my & DJ/KJ check out the
Biography page to view more information about me (Owner / DJ / KJ). We have also donated time and services to local organizations that are working towards a cause that we connect with, such as
Camp Good Times (
see testimonial here) and MUSC's Safety Fair.
Music
Our music library is very extensive and is updated regularly, covering everything from older country and big band to the latest in pop, rock and dance. We also have a very large collection of beach and shag favorites .. after all, we are on the coast of the Carolina's - where those dances were born. We have anything and everything needed to get people up out their seats and shuffling their shoes on the dance floor. For music that we do not have, we can download almost any music requested that is available from our subscription service providers via web access.
Those are a few examples I picked - you might want to review each page for spelling, grammar and sentence composition.