Having a new flyer made

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nextgen1

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Just dropping by and thought I would let you guys know what I have been up to. We are working on upping our image. Part of that is a rework of our current branding. We had new cards designed and now are in the middle of having a nice flyer put together. Both are different creators and both are doing a great job for us. Again I love hiring professionals to do the job. Its what we preach and its what I try and follow.

Here is the graphic from the cards and the flyer. The cards are produced and we love them. The flyer has some work to go but is almost there. Some photos will be added, changed and text in the proper places but I'm sure you all with get and idea. I have already told the graphics guy to lose the same graphic in the back and put the pic of my wife and myself in the circle that says about us.

TNGCardfront.jpg

Card Back.jpg

flyer.jpg

Back.jpg

Dave & Cathy Enhanced.JPG
 
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On the top two, having a picture of ONE girl...
gives the impression that SHE is the DJ named on the card.
 
I didn't get that impression .. but maybe that's because I know he's not a she .. or is he? Hmmmmmm. Dammit Mike!

Also both girls are different people. I think the 1st one is the front of his card and the 2nd is the back of his card.
 
The bit about the photo booth says "4 hour of operation and up to one houre of down time."

- First, hour is misspelt.
- Second, downtime doesn't have a space.
- Third, that wording is weird... It says to me that the photo booth could be down for up to an hour at any time during the night.

Just say the photo booth is available for 4 hours and leave it at that.

You also still have the lorem ipsum text on there but I assume you know that :D

Otherwise looks good.
 
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Also both girls are different people. I think the 1st one is the front of his card and the 2nd is the back of his card.

Normally, when you see a picture of ONE person on a business card, it's the person named on the card.
My point was, if someone saw a picture of a bride AND a groom, they would get the whole "wedding" idea instantly.
Remember, with most advertising, you have to attract their interest and catch their attention in a matter of seconds.
If they have to stop and think for even a moment, you've lost them.
 
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I don't disagree .. **putting the good ol DA hat on** .. but when you flip the card over and see a different girl, what would you think then?

You don't instantly think wedding when you see someone in a bridal gown?
 
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I don't disagree .. but when you flip the card over and see a different girl, what would you think then?

Dave's a lucky guy?
 
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I don't disagree .. **putting the good ol DA hat on** but when you flip the card over and see a different girl, what would you think then? You don't instantly think wedding when you see someone in a bridal gown?

Problem is, you don't want them to HAVE TO to stop and think.
And it's tough to know it's a wedding gown, when you don't see the whole person in the pic.

This is what stuck in my mind
You're a potential bride, you get the card,
and here is how you are "introduced" to Dave....

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Wouldn't most people expect to see Dave's picture,
next to his name in big letters?
 
Problem is, you don't want them to HAVE TO to stop and think.

Depending on how cute they are, you might want them to stop. ;)

And it's tough to know it's a wedding gown, when you don't see the whole person in the pic.

Maybe, but I figured out it was a bridal outfit.

This is what stuck in my mind
You're a potential bride, you get the card,
and here is how you are "introduced" to Dave....

I get your point, just living up to DA - thats the rule when you put the hat on.

Wouldn't most people expect to see Dave's picture,
next to his name in big letters?

I don't know - have you seen what he looks like compared to the bride?

;)

So what yer sayin is .. he should put a b/g pic on the front and a pic of himself on the back.
 
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Actually I think I'm the one being the D.A.
:eek:
But I have said my peace.
THAT IS ALL!